Check Your Work
Read more of Mikhail’s family description. He needs to make some changes.
• The first sentence needs a detail about the games. To add it, he used this mark:
.• He needs to make the last word in the third sentence plural. To add the letter s, he used the same mark:
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What other errors does he need to fix?
my 
. He plays them in the living room. He’s an expert at playing his 
My sister likes fish. She has two fishbowl in her bedroom. she likes animal and they like her.
Look back at your family description. Read it aloud. Then ask yourself the questions in the checklist. Mark your changes.
Did I say something special about each person?- Did I include enough details?
- Did I use plural nouns correctly?
Finish and Share
Use these steps to finish your family descriptions and make your album.
1. Write the family descriptions neatly and correctly.
2. Add a drawing or picture for each person you wrote about.
3. Write a title and your name at the top of the first page.
4. Display your family album in your classroom.
Read aloud
Share your writing with friends. Use these tips.