Read more of Gerardo’s blog. He needs to make some changes.
• He needs to capitalize the name of a place in the first sentence. He put three red lines under the letter: .
• He needs to capitalize the name of a month in the second sentence. He put three red lines under that letter, too: .
• He needs to take out a detail that doesn’t go with the topic. To take out this text, he used this mark: .
What other changes does he need to make?
Look back at your blog. Read it aloud. Then ask yourself the questions in the checklist. Mark your changes.
Use these steps to finish your blog.
1. Write the blog neatly and correctly.
2. Be sure you have a title.
3. Add a drawing or picture.
4. Put your blog on a bulletin board in your classroom.
Share your writing with friends. Use these tips.