• 2 Mark Your Changes What changes do you want to make to your draft? Use the Revising Marks or special features in your computer’s word-processing program to show the changes.

    Trang Bui’s Revisions

    My family stood by Illustration of the insertion of the words “big glass” before “windows” and watched the plane land at SeaTac airport in Seattle on October 28, 2007. We were so Illustration of changes to: excited! When the passengers started coming through the door, we lined up so we could see. I had to lift my little Illustration of changes to: sister up so she could look over the heads of the people in front. Suddenly everyone was hugging and crying. My little sister tried to Illustration of changes to: hide My because she didn't know Illustration of revision of the last sentence and an insertion of a new ending sentence

    Revising Marks

    Illustration of caret insertion mark that looks like an upside down VAdd.
    Illustration of proofreader's move mark, a circle with an arrowMove to here.
    Illustration of replace copy mark—a line with an insert caret mark at the endReplace with this.
    Illustration of proofreader's deletion mark—a line that loops once aroundTake out.